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Keith Long's avatar

Love the name. Is this a part of a larger world? I read it alone and it works, but it also feels like a window to a wider happening. The characters are extremely well written, their interactions were snappy and felt realistic.

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Bear Savo's avatar

Thank you, Keith! I’m not quite sure if this will be expanded. My concentration while writing it was the characters. I’m happy to know that you found them compelling.

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Keith Long's avatar

I definitely don’t think you need to, but it would also be very easy and feel natural to. It’s a colorful world. I’m intrigued to read your novella next

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